Free writing critical literacy

Once Upon A time, there was a Shark that is new to the city and he had no friends. He lived in a Shark tank and everything was different for him there was a lot of food to eat. But he had A special talent and that was Doing front and backflips out of the water. But his problem was bigger than ever since he came from a shark tank he thought he had to be nice all the time to other creatures that want to kill that shark and he didn't know what to do but he made a friend and that friend told him ''defend your self and eat fish when you feel hungry''.