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Showing posts with label English 2019. Show all posts

Wednesday, 16 October 2019

Unexpected Wealth



Time to clean my garage I say to myself I'm moving all the boxes with old toys and clothes I had when I was younger and behind one of the boxes There was a Nike shoebox and I thought there were shoes in it but I was completely wrong. Inside the shoebox, there were $ 40,000 dollars with  A note inside the note said.

Dear whoever is reading this 

You are wondering why there is a whole bunch of cash inside this Ill tell you why but promise me do not tell anyone this cash was from a 1990 bank robbery that I have done in 1990 I have put it here to collect it but I can't I'm in jail now so The money is yours. I robed the bank over the street where you are I'm not sure why but I needed the money and I thought I would get it back but they found me across the street running but why in a shoebox I recently just brought Nike shoes and I put the money in there and ran to a random house which is yours now I threw the box and ran.

Yours sincerely 
BIlly bob  


Tuesday, 15 October 2019

Essay brainstorming.

School should close when its hotter than 30 degrees 

I agree when it's hot most people can't learn properly because of the heat that is accessing the brain and causes them to not learn as well as they can. If school closes they can still wor from home but without the heat hitting them as much. 

Tuesday, 10 September 2019

Self directed learning


The one I will be working on Is Manage my learning time so I complete all tasks.

How I'll I do that?
I will make sure I finish my work before the period ends and less talking will help me accomplish that Also managing my work instead of messing around with things that are already finished 

Tuesday, 14 May 2019

Blog Practice essay

5)Adverb Sentence

Curiously, Quicky, Rapidly, Often, Firstly, lastly, Secondly, Similarly, Technically, Remarkably, Importantly, Readily, Interestingly, Significantly.  

*Comma goes after the adverb 
Eg: Surprisingly, Mrs handly was on time to class.

Quickly, I ran home to eat.
Firstly, Jireh came to school.

6) Begin with a preposition
Proposition are words that indicate movement and position.
Against, Under, Bellow, At, For, Throughout, Near, About, Behind Within, Before.

Eg: Within, The hour all the students had finished their essays.

Behind The door, there was Hidden treasure in the light.
Under the bed, something mysterious was lurking there.

Basic- Body Paragraph 
Point- State the point you wish to make. 
Evidence- Provide evidence to support your point 2-3 sentences. 
Explain- 3-4 sentences that explain your evidence in relation to your point/question.
link- Back to your point 1-2sentecs to the next paragraph 

Point- Everyone knows that it is better to read the book than watch the movie.

Evidence-For example, the movie made of wonder is very different from the book it leaves out lots of information in the book the main teacher is female but in the movie, they are male also the camp incident missed out the information about Auggie hearing aids

Explain-This incident made more sense in the book because he was bullied for having his low bo ears which made him look different didn't make sense to bully him in the movie.

Link-for these reasons the book as clearly better than the movie However, you can enjoy the movie without reading the book.








Tuesday, 5 February 2019

Critical literacy English






What makes this video convincing?
The video made it convincing because it was on the news and made me watch the whole video it had interesting facts I didn't know before and had good detail on what the situation is.

Who published this video?
The news site called onion news network and the people who are in the video 

How are the teenagers portrayed in this clip?
It's about rolling  eyes and texting  and they always think teenagers stay on there phones 

Why has the director cast them this way?
To make it more real and convincing that it is better and believable 

In whose interest is this text?
They were trying to get parents to get convinced to get their kids off their phones  

 Who is real in this text?
The doctor and used a picture of the girl's brain 
The news people look real and the parents 

What social realities does this video portray?
If they made something that is boring no one will watch it and if it's not convincing or real  they will say its fake 

Fact
If you see a video with a green onion don't believe it is a channel that  makes thongs up 
like on the video up top.