10Sp English

8The Ed-start 
It makes for a punchy opening to the sentence 
Committed, Undaunted, forced, Gifted, Blighted, Thrilled, delighted, blessed, overpowered, Bewildered, Supprised, Drowned, Foreshadowed, Drafted.

Eg: Thrilled By the score, the coach shouted us all Maccas.

Supprised by what happened, When everyone started playing as a team.

Committed to school, but too lazy to go.

11 The W-start 
The-W start makes writing sound thoughtful and knowledgeable 
When Where What Wheres, Who, Whilst, While 

Eg: Wheres Liz played netball, I played Hockey.

When I was walking To school, I found A puppy On the footpath.
While I walked to school, I saw my friend.

Point: PS4 is better than Xbox 

Evidence well Most people prefer PS4 over Xbox ps4 has cheaper games and you don't need to pay money to play games like Fortnite But for PS4 if you get online for a month or 3 or 12 and you get free games.

Explain 
Well PS4 is better because you get more games online isn't that expensive and you don't need to pay to play some games like Fortnite or other games. People think Xbox is better but It's not true gamers have PS4s. For Xbox, you have to buy something called Xbox live just to get on the Console to play games but for PS4 you don't you just make A account and have some fun and play games.

Link PS4 Is Better than Xbox From some of those reasons That is why I think ps4 is better than Xbox