Tomorrow when the war began

What are the advantages and disadvantages of first-person narration?

Disadvantages
She had a lot of people yelling at her yelling ideas at him

They had to ring their parents

Advantages

She has a friend to back her up

She got to write a book

They all sat with each other

What kind of story do you think Ellie is going to tell? Uses evidence from the text to support your answers.

It says they are going to a camp to sit down and talk

What set of skills do these characters have that convince their parents that they can ‘go bush’ independently. Find examples for three characters.

Convincing words she had to convince her dad and mum to let her take the car they had to ask who they are going with she asked her friends if they wanted to come.

Kevin He wasn't so keen on going but went anyway

Ellie, she convinced her dad to let her go and drive the car and her dad knows she's6 a good driver
Fiona, she sounded amazed when she asked her if she wanted to go with her and she told her that her mum and dad want questions and want to call her mum

What picture of Kevin do we get in chapter 3?

He as a habit of breaking things instead of going to trees and cutting wood so he's a sacred boy

What does Ellie liken Fi to? Do you think this is a fair assessment of her character? Use examples from the text to support your thinking

Yes because of shes the one who wants to organize the camp with her friends for a few nights in the book it says we haven't been out to the river In age's so let's go there said, Corrie,

Ellie claims that ‘Hell’ is only a label and that people label things all the time, often ignoring or overlooking certain labeled places or things. She then comes to the conclusion that ‘Hell was people’. Is she right? What’s your opinion, on labeling and Hell?

well I haven't seen if people were hell so I don't believe it is

What was especially peculiar about the planes that flew over Hell? ‘Their ------, their ------, their----- frightened me.’ Do these characteristics have any significance?

Tomorrow when the war began

How do you think this story will be written?

I think the story will be written in old fashion words because of how old the front looks and how the picture looks

Why do you think the story is entitled as it is?

when a few friends go somewhere and come back with a big war going on because of the title when the war began

Where do you think the story will take place?

In Australia and they, go camping then come back with a disaster

What time period do you think the story is set in?

back in the old days and in the afternoon or midnight

Work for social studies

Feelings
they want the sun to go down so they can go back and sleep since they are exhausted and tired

information

relate
relates to us because they want to rest and so do we

what are they talking about



Song 2


feelings

information

relate


what are they talking about

human rights

Slave trade triangle 

What the Slave Trade Triangle was?

It was a triangle of trading materials with other countries, and to see what they have in their country

What's the First Passage is?
Guns and ships were purchased and taken to Europe. african slaves were kidnaped

What's the Middle Passage is?
Gun and materials traded for humans. They have been put on slave ships and sent to America

What's the Third Passage is?
Materials like cotton and tobacco that slaves picked were sent to Europe and sold

What I found interesting?
I found interesting that they traded guns for people and that they all had to fit in one boat all side by side and that the chiefs and people were cruel and they got the slaves to do all of the work for them

Tomorrow when the war began

Name three dystopia synonyms 
cacotopia
anti-utopia
katkatopia



What is the antonym for dystopia

Critical literacy reflection

Critical literacy reflection  

What do you think critical literacy is 

I think critical literacy is focusing on a type of project that you answer questions about it learning what the topic is and doing other topics about critical literacy.

What did you learn about critical literacy

I learned that you have to do a lot of learning but understand what you are doing and doing questions 

what did you find challenging during that topic 

I found challenging that I had to write down a lot of words in my blog and had to find the correct information

How will you use critical literacy skills in real life

if you are doing a job and you have to look at the video and answer them you will know what to do because you have already learned and hard thinking.

what are you looking forward to in English this year 

Activity and learning new things I haven't learned before and undert]standing the things we will learn.

Critical literacy

Today we are answering questions from a matrix and doing 4 questions for a short story and a song.

short story

Why am I reading this text 

I am reading the text because its about Christmas and what they did if they had no money and it is interesting 

Is the text fair 

yes it is fair because she tells you that she can't do Christmas but made up an idea and you people at home can do one instead of buying presents 

What do the images suggest 

well, there is only one picture about a Christmas tree but it relates to the story since it is Christmas themed.

 What is the text about and how do you know 

the text is about this mum who is writing a story about Christmas and she can't afford it so she has an idea because she sees a trolly and she was like I can take something off and make a trolly like I had when  was young 

Gods plan

What does the genre belong to 

it is a good song with  a good beat so I'm saying it belongs in a hip hop or rap since its fast and slow song 

What do the images suggest 

the images suggest on helping people who need help and being there for people and anything is possible

what are the structures and the features on this song 
Dancing, singing waling. and people who are happy on reviving gifs.

Who is allowed to speak 
anyone who was on the video

Year 10 Home economics

Year 10 2019 health-safety practical


What are the 6 needs of bacteria for them to survive
-Warmth
-moisture
-Oz
-Ph levels 
- Temperature 



What do the following temps mean
37 Optimal growth-party time 
75 Internal temp
80 Reheat 


Describe one way to keep your food safe from bacteria 
Put the food in the freezer so the bacteria goes to sleep 

Chicken and rice patties 

What we did 
Last week on Friday my group made chicken and rice patties but I wasn't there last week on Friday So what they told me was they first washed their hands and put their aprons on and got straight in to making the food and getting the ingredients for the food.

After all of that, they mixed all of the ingredients and made the patties they put it in the oven and set to fan bake and turned it on to 180  to cook then they finished and cleaned everything and ate their food.


What we learned 
My group learned how to make chicken and rice patties also they learned what to put in then and how long to cook them for and what to set the oven on also where all the things go and the last thing is how to hold things without getting hurt.

What we would do next time
For me well I wasn't there so I need to work on is to come to school and help my group out so they get done faster but they told me to do more communication.

Home economics 2019 hamburgers 

What roles did I have to do in my group
The roles I did was getting the food ready for my group so we can make the patties and fillings and helping make the patties and the last job I did was doing the dishes and cleaning the table.


What health and safety issues you encountered
We were lack of talking and movement we wouldn't get things and we would get mixed up  we would mess things up and not ask people for help

What improvement need to be made 
More talking
More movement
Ask people for help
Go faster to get it done
Do the food right
Follow the rules

10 Sp critical literacy questions

Critical literacy questioning matrix 

Today for English we are learning about critical literacy and today we were doing was watching ads and then doing a questioning matrix with a lot of questions.

Sensodyne

What does the author want us to know 

They want us to now that Sensodyne will make your teeth white and make the tooth straight and stronger with protection.

What has been left out on this text

I think that if it actually works then that would make me or believable instead of that one doctor talking about it there isn't enough evidence 

Who is allowed to speak
The doctor is allowed to speak because she is the one who is talking about the product 

What is the text about 
The text is about selling and promoting the product  because they talk about it and it has a picture and explains that it works 

Mc Donalds

Who is allowed to speak

The people who are doing the ad so the McDonalds worker the customers and the people who want the meal. 

Why are you reading this text

I am reading or watching this text because Its mc Donalds they have good burgers and chips and they want people to go to Mc Donalds so that's why they want to make an ad with things that are cheap

What views of the world is this presenting
this is presenting about how cheap the meals are to the world and trying to get them to go to Mc Donalds for more money and customers.

Who is missing for this text
Ronald mc Donald is missing since ll of the kids like him so that could make it better for the kids to come and buy the meals and all of the people who work there to make it look real or better.

Here are the videos if you want to look at the ads 

Make sure you leave a comment to give me some advice to make my blogs better thank you.

Sensodyne

Palmolive

Bunchaballoons

Mc Donald's

Pizza Hut

Lift Plus

State Insurance

Anti Drink Driving Message

Kiwirail

10 sp critical literacy

Critical literacy butterflies 

What kind of language is used in this text?

the language is not good because it doesn't make sense there is a lot of mistakes and I also think that they dropped out of school because the English weren't the best.

What is this text about and how do you know?

This text is about what you should think in the point of view how things were for them and that butterflies eat there food 

What does this author want us to know?

they want us to know that butterflies can eat your food and so the teacher was saying that you need to kill them so they don't eat your food.

How are the characters constructed in this text? 

What kind of social realities does this text portray?  

That they are telling people to kill butterflies because they eat your food.

Blog 2019

What is the currency?
Currency is a general in a particular country 

Where was it used and who used it?

What do you think are some advantages to this? money 

What do you think are some disadvantages?

Any facts?

The carp test English critical liteacey

Video of green onion

click the link to watch the video of the braindead teen 

Currency
according to youtube, it was published on February the 13th in 2012 so I think it is an old video

Reailabitly 
Yes the source is fair because it gives detail and it looks real because of the people acting and the girl performing the act

Authority
yes the author is informed because they were the one who posted the video and made it

purpose/ point of view  

This video is fake because of the green onion and they are mocking on what teenagers do when they go on their phones not all teenagers do that  yes it has agenda because it has a purpose and it has examples of the video

Math blog

What were the main mathematical concepts or ideas of what you learned  or that we discussed in class 

I learned that with one piece of paper fold it multiple times and cut it makes a shape we also did some things with a string to make shapes like triangles squares and more

We watched  a few videos about math and I learned that math isn't about speed or how good you are it is about believing in your self and knowing you can do it because if you go fast then you can get some wrong

What questions do you still have about

How many shapes can you make with one piece of paper and one cut?

10 Sp critical literacy practice

The star

Can you find this image online 
Yes you can find this image online if you search China traffic jam about a protest about gas


Current 
It was on a Saturday 18th of November 2017 on 11:39 Pm Myt 
Reliability 
 Yes the source is fair because it says it's from China and it gives reasons about it
Authority 
It was published on the star and they were the one who wrote it

purpose/point of view 
It was an opinion and a fact it was explaining it was explaining where it was from

Factual or satirical

What does the website look like?
The website has a lot of pictures with things on the side with a green shaped onion

What photos is it using?
It is using pictures off the internet and making an article about it

What headlines are they sharing?
it is using a famous basketball person as a title for more people to look at it

Do you think it is a Factual website or a Satirical website?

I think the onion is satirical (fake)

Critical literacy second video

What aspects of stories was she (Andrea)  interested in?

She's interested in the hidden messages

What did the ad imply with the big diamond ring? 

you can only love someone if you buy someone something big and wants the husband to buy the big ring   

 What is subtext?

To be noticed by people that didn't notice before you were something you can't see 

What you look like and looking good 

With CL, can each student have their own answer?

Yes, there is no right or wrong answers and people want to hear what their thoughts are

What does Andrea compare CL too?

wonder womans lecture of truth

How can CL be applied to your life outside of school?

because of movies and games also things you read on the internet and books

Critical literacy English

What makes this video convincing?

The video made it convincing because it was on the news and made me watch the whole video it had interesting facts I didn't know before and had good detail on what the situation is.

Who published this video?

The news site called onion news network and the people who are in the video 

How are the teenagers portrayed in this clip?

It's about rolling  eyes and texting  and they always think teenagers stay on there phones 

Why has the director cast them this way?

To make it more real and convincing that it is better and believable 

In whose interest is this text?

They were trying to get parents to get convinced to get their kids off their phones  

 Who is real in this text?

The doctor and used a picture of the girl's brain 

The news people look real and the parents 

What social realities does this video portray?

If they made something that is boring no one will watch it and if it's not convincing or real  they will say its fake 

Fact

If you see a video with a green onion don't believe it is a channel that  makes thongs up 

like on the video up top.